Wednesday, April 20, 2011

While reading activity: Chapter 21

In the twenty-first chapter Jonas is together with Gabe on the run away from the community.
He didn't even got the important attributes, which the Giver wanted to give him so it's more complicated.
He took his father's bike with the baby's high chair, in which he put Gabe, and drove under cover of the night far away.
At night he raved as fast as he could and on day he scaned the ambit for a place to hide and to sleep.
He gave his smoothiest dreams to Gabe so that he was sleeping most of the time and when an airplane flew over their hads he remembered for snow and coldness and gave a part of this memories to Gabe in order that they freeze and the sonsors of the airplanes can't locate them.

1 comment:

  1. - He didn't GET (you only need to have the form of to do in the past tense here!)
    - Mind the 3rd person singular -s in the present tense
    - don't switch tenses without reason! summaries are written in the present tense as the basic tense.

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